We take a red pen to your landing page.
Not a score in a vacuum. Every finding is a mark on your actual page, quoted from your own copy, plus the hero we'd ship instead.
First mark free. All marks, six scores and the rewrite: $19. No account.
The hero names a category, not a problem.
“The financial OS for modern life.”
Five seconds in, a buyer has learned which shelf you sit on, not what breaks if they close the tab. Category words are what you call yourself. Buyers arrive searching for the failure.
Worked example on our own homepage copy
We roast the famous ones too.
Real reports · read them in fullThis page relies entirely on personal brand gravity while burying its massive value under a chaotic pile of navigation links and a utility button masquerading as a CTA.
Read the full roast →ShipFast wins on social proof but loses on focus, burying its massive time-saving value under a mountain of distracting CTAs and generic 'ship fast' platitudes.
Read the full roast →The page trades clarity for edge, assuming users already know why they'd want to 'fire a photographer' instead of explaining the massive cost and logistics savings.
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